Unfortunately, I did not receive any feedback from my classmates. But, I have revised my product as time went on and will be evaluating myself.
1) You. Who you are. What your talents are. What your skills and experiences are. Also: what are your aspirations? Specifically regarding your business concept, how do you see this business (if you were to start it) playing a role in your life?
I am a junior public relations student. I excel in marketing, public speaking, social media and graphic design.
I wrote the previous sentence in my Idea Napkin No. 1, but I would like to add that I have made connections throughout the community with people who share this passion. I also would like to say that I understand how to create funding for the playground through different methods of marketing to legislature and potential donors.
2) What are you offering to customers? Describe the product or service (in other words, how you'll solve customers' unmet needs).
I am offering an inclusive playground that raises awareness of mental health and education through games.
I have now changed this to be more inclusive throughout the autistic community. I found that I can still incorporate educational games for the playground and I could raise awareness to different parents about symptoms and triggers of autism.
3) Who are you offering it to? Describe, in as much detail as possible, the demographic and psychographic characteristics of your customers. Think especially of this question: what do your customers all have in common?
All types of kids. Kids with autism, kids with adhd, low-income families, everyone with a child.
I have now just revised it to kids with autism. I found that this is a more receptive approach to the playground and there is more of a demand for it. However, I still believe mental awareness among all children is necessary.
4) Why do they care? Your solution is only valuable insofar as customers believe it's valuable to them. Here, explain why customers will actually pay you money to use your product or service.
My customers should care because the importance of mental health and education cannot be overlooked. My investors should care because it is shaping the future of America.
I still agree with this statement. However, I would like to add how children with autism are different and singled out for being different. This playground will be a good environment for the children to thrive in.
5) What are your core competencies? What sets you apart from everyone else? Also: what do you have that nobody else has?
My invention is set apart from someone else because playgrounds don't think about the psychology and education behind the active play.
I still stand with this statement, but more geared towards autism. I would like to add that it brings inclusivity to the autistic community.
Throughout this assignment, I changed a few elements of the playground. I did this because I wanted my business to thrive as successfully as possible while helping children in need. I decided to narrow it down because my concept was too broad. My product cannot change the entire world but it can help some.
Since I gave my own evaluation because there was none from classmates, I will refer to the rest of the assignments as my multiple points.