https://youtu.be/2_ltmKuyZag
A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
After reading my feedback, I decided to add a few more sentences of a reflection to my pitch. Other than that, I got good feedback from my classmates.
What did you change, based on the feedback?
I added a little bit more research because I noticed that people said they were curious about the subject of my product.
Hey Emma, I really like this pitch. I thought your sentences were really smooth and nothing seemed rush. You gave a great description of the playground and made it very easy to imagine. If I had to give any type of criticism it would be next time try to dress a little more professional. I felt that all around this was a really great pitch and if you have to give it again I only see it getting even better!
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